The building that I like the most is the Eiffel tower.
It’s an iron tower built in 1889 by Gustave Eiffel, ever since the tower has represented the French culture; it’s a symbol of France.
The Eiffel tower is an amazing structure; I mean it’s a master piece.
By the way, it’s a very important tourism WF place; if you go to Paris and you don’t visit the Eiffel tower, it’s like if you had never been in wwParis.
I suppose that the view on ww the top of the tower is wonderful, I hope soon I will visit it WO.
1 comment:
Good work. You don`t need to say "this is my opinion" "this is what i like most" - because YOU are writing the reader already knows it`s your opinion!!!
"by the way" is a little too informal / conversational.
Words like "suppose" are equivocal - it`s better to be clear and confident with your choice of vocabulary
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