The Eiffel Tower

The most beautiful building MWs is the Eiffel tower.

It’s an iron tower built in 1889 by Gustave Eiffel, ever since the tower has represented the French culture; it’s a symbol of France.

The Eiffel tower is an amazing structure; it’s a master piece WF .

In WW the other hand, it’s a very important tourism place; if you go to Paris and you don’t visit the Eiffel tower, it’s like if you had never been in Paris.

The view on the top of the tower is wonderful; you can see the entire city.

When you think about Paris MW is very common to identify the city with the structure and vice versa.

This gorgeous tower has been the inspiration for a lot of people like artists, singers and writers

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1 comment:

friend of the spanish monster said...

good work
Some good use of language, but you definitely need to concentrate on structure. intro, body, conclusion. 3 clear paragraphs. The conclusion restates your introduction in stronger terms - maybe talk about the buildings legacy, or how paris wouldnt be paris without it