it is not an obligation, it is a moral sence SP

Some students think that the EW life REVOLVES around their houses, their friends and other things like parties, to go shopping and to travel, but sometimes it is necessary that they’ll VT / EW learn about the EW real life and the real world, because we are the future of this generation and we have to do something to change the world.

Students have two points of view about the EW mandatory volunteering. Some students say that the EW mandatory volunteering is a personal choice and they used VT this argument to refuse the service community WO , but other students think that the EW mandatory volunteering is a good experience for their lives.

I don’t agree with WW the EW mandatory volunteering might be the correct way to be a philanthropist, because when you decide to help another person just WW you are going to want to do it, because this fact is in your heart and the most important thing is that nobody tell AG you “you have to help somebody else”. But I completely agree that the EW mandatory volunteering is an excellent way for the students have more moral sense about the real situation in the world and this way maybe they would understand that the EW mandatory volunteering is not only MW requirement for the EW graduation, it’s more than an obligation, because when you do the EW community service, you could feel that you are changing the world because somebody will tell you “thank you for this day or thank you for give me a happy day “.

Maybe if the students wouldn’t WW be EW disagree with the mandatory volunteering, they are going to WW (THIS IS A CONDITIONAL!!) become a better citizens, better persons and they would find out a new life philosophy (like the boys scouts) , giving and learning to be a better person.

Andromeda26

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friend of the spanish monster said...

VERY GOOD ANDROMEDA - YOU EXPRESS YOUR OPINION CLEARLY AND WITH FEW ERRORS. AS THE CENTRAL POINT IS MANDATORY VOLUNTEERING YOU SHOULD ADDRESS IT CLEARLY IN THE INTRODUCTION (IN ADDITION TO WHAT YOU WROTE)
THE MAIN GRAMMAR POINT IS YOUR USE OF ARTICLES - PERHAPS A TURORIAL WITH ME OR THE ENGLISH DEPARTMENT. vERY GOOD WORK THOUGH YOU ARE WELL PREPARED FOR THE EXAM